Dr. Paul Martin Lester, Professor
California State University, Fullerton
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Assignment 9: Writing cutlines

Probably the least respected element of photojournalism is the lowly cutline. That's a shame because a good cutline not only educates readers about what they are seeing in the photograph but inspires them to learn more about the subject by reading the story. Write your cutlines as if they were mini news stories.

Include the 5 Ws:

… What: The reader needs an explanation of what is happening in the picture, but don't be obvious.

… Who: The names, ages of the people in the picture need to be stated. Use "from left" rather than "on the left, in the center, to the right."

… When/Where: If this information helps the reader understand the picture, tell the exact time and location. Otherwise, simply state the day and general location.

… Why: Tell the reader how important it is to understand the meaning of the picture--to further their understanding of the subjects.

You also need to consider:

… Small details: Point out little details in the picture that might be overlooked by a casual reader.

… Quote: Whenever possible, use a quotation from the subject.

… Taste, Smell, Touch: Round out a caption with sensual details.

… Editorializing: Do not make conclusions about what the subject is thinking or feeling--let the readers decide.

… Camera techniques: Explain unusual special effects of the camera.

… Publication specific: Make sure your cutline fits the publication.

Using the information supplied with each picture, write a caption (a headline for the picture) and a cutline. NOTE: You may not want to use all the information given.

John and Sue Mulligan with six-month-old Jake in their home in Anaheim Hills. John was recently laid off from his job as an engineer for Hughes Electronics, Fullerton. Says Sue, "We're really happy. Our kid is healthy, we eat good food and we have a really nice home." Life magazine

Caption: ______________________________________

Dramatic photo in which horror is etched on the faces of the boys as policeman lifts the sheet which covers the body of a slain playmate. From left, inspector George Heege, Harold Reed, 16-years old, Donald Horn, 15-years old. Body is Donald Goudie, 12-years old allegedly killed by a Hunters Point car repairman yesterday. LA Times

Caption: ______________________________________

From the left of the picture: John Goodley, 20, Mike Smith, 23, and Brenda Farley, 22. They're watching a baseball game yesterday: Eckerd vs. Cal State Fullerton. The Titans won 12-1. The photographer, Norman Zeisloft was fired when it was learned he wrote on Smithıs feet. News Photographer magazine

Caption: ______________________________________